Portfolio feedback
Hey everyone I need detailed feedback on my portfolio site. https://broderickfowler.com/ I want to know what works, what’s not working, where do you see my strengths and weaknesses. How can I improve my portfolio site, my skills. What are my top skills Positions I am passionate about and industries - Project Management for a creative studio/agency that’s partnered with sports or video games industry - Web designer/ visual designer/ digital concept creator - Video editor for sport media companies Thank you!!! https://broderickfowler.com/ #layoff #assistance #employment
Quick feedback in random order: I first opened it on mobile where the background being blurred (on Firefox) makes it feel like the landing page is inside a modal which is disorienting Unclear why the first images are labeled but the last ones aren't. For each clickable image you should label it with a category and also what you expect the user to see there. For example Olympus Wine (brand design, graphic design) Your site could have at the top what you consider yourself so people visiting know where to place you. E.g. graphic designer/video editor The spacing between blocks on the landing page is uneven The selected link state in the nav is white on beige, accessibility and legibility problem. Your site has an mix of serif and sans serif font (for example on the wine site one heading is serif one is sans serif). Serif feels a little poorly matched for your style imo so I'd say go all sans serif with only 1 or two fonts.
Thank you for the detailed feedback. I’m working on making changes. When you mentioned the background being blurred on Firefox, was it pixelated blurred or more like upload latency slowed causing the background to appear blurred? I’ll post back here one I’m done with the changes!!
Hey I just checked it again and the problem was isolated to the weird in app browser that blind opens stuff in. You can disregard that first item.
Pro-tip: "Jimmy Hendrix" is actually spelled Jimi Hendrix. Also, fix the css on mobile for those box links. It looks like this: Video s Concept s